After playing for long
with friends and making lots of splashes, I signaled my retirement to them. Fully drenched I returned back to the rocky
dry patch of the beach. The lazy afternoon, serene sea side and few revelers made for a great
escape, I thought. Perching myself at the earshot of the photographer I decided
to relax.
Wrong choice of place, I reckoned
in a short while. Every other five minutes the beach goers and the photographer
made ruckus. The haggling over the price saw no one winning. The photographer
seemed in no hurry to make money. He appeared to be a man of strong built and surprisingly
polished tone. ‘You never know’, I reminded myself, as these days, even the guides
at the tourist locations speak in impeccable language.
What got me curious however was the fact that he was sitting with his back to the crowd. When I searched
in the direction of his vision, all I could see was the green patch of bushes dwarfed
by the coconut trees swaying to the breeze. Maybe he was trying to kill the
time and capture nature in his lens, I reasoned. Before I could fetch my
attention towards my friends at distance, a customer lingered around the
photographer.
‘Photo in one minute’, said
the man in panting voice.
‘Hmm”, replied the photographer.
‘In one minute, are you
sure? What you have is a top brand DSLR. Its not the regular one-minute photo camera.’
‘Sir, I am in this business since
long. Its not my first day today.'
‘But then I can’t see your
printing machine.'
‘It’s right under this table’,
replied the photographer, pointing to the table. ‘But do you really want to a click?’
‘Oh yes. But not for 30 bucks.
Its exorbitant. You are charging too much because of your monopolistic presence.
I will pay 20’
‘Not worth my efforts. See
the picture quality. I use special pearl and luster photo paper and not the
ordinary satin or mat one’.
‘Still the price is high.
Make it 25 and I will give you good business.’
‘How many and where?’
Pointing straight to the sea-side
and looking at the distance, the customer asked, ‘Can you see that large group
of men, women and children?’
As the customer turned
around, he realized that the photographer was not checking out in the direction
he pointed. Little annoyed, he quizzed the photographer, ‘Don’t you want
to earn few bucks today?’, this time with a sharp tone. The photographer, smiled
at him and did not say anything, maintaining his gaze towards the green patch.
With hands on his waist and a puzzled look, the customer was about to utter something.
The photographer, got up at
once, as if with a bolt while taking out a revolver from underneath the table.
The customer was startled. Before he could scream, the photographer sealed his
mouth with his robust palm. In a wink he darted towards the green patch. By
now, I got curious too. I got up on my feet and leaned a bit to see the drama
unfold.
With a sprint, the
photographer nabbed a half-clad youth. Few more well built men from the
revelers also joined the photographer. They caught hold of two more young
boys. The life at the beach came to a standstill. I could not hear my heart
beats, forget the waves crashing on the beach. An eerie silence enveloped
atmosphere, barring the commotion, shouting and yelling coming from near the
green patch.
Soon the photographer, his
gang along with three nabbed youth with their hands cuffed, walked towards the place where we were seated.
I froze to death as the photographer approached us. He wore a smile. ‘Inspector Sabale’, he said
as he extended his hands towards the customer for a handshake. He flashed his Id card. ‘We had the tip about these
miscreants and so had laid this trap. These are drug peddlers. They were here
to handover a consignment to the local customers and beach goers’.
With great efforts I closed my dropped jaw!
With great efforts I closed my dropped jaw!
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I have tried to put two prompts together, in my story; Namely the picture prompt and 'an interesting conversation you overheard recently'
OMG...its scary but yes, it happens in real.
ReplyDeleteThanks Upasana for visiting and reading this story. I am glad that you could see it closer to reality.
DeleteBeaches have such variety of stories to tell! Loved yours, Anagha. Happens.
ReplyDeleteThanks Varsh for visiting and appreciating!
DeleteOh my God its wonderfuly exciting I thought it will be something supernatural .But this was even better twist.Enjoyed this!
ReplyDeleteThank you Amrita for visiting. Glad that you liked it.
DeleteQuite the story Anagha. Never expected this in a hundred years. Had me from the word go
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for uplifting remarks Sunita. I am honoured! Thanks for visiting.
DeleteAn unexpected and creative take on the prompt. I have chosen the picture prompt too and written a nostalgic post.
ReplyDeleteOn my way to read your take... sure it will be an interesting post!
DeleteThanks for visiting and appreciating my story.
I loved that twist! What a gripping story. Totally not what I expected, but that was mostly because of how the photographer looked in the image. But as they say, looks can be deceiving, LOL!
ReplyDeleteThanks Nikita for praises! Happy that you visited me!
DeleteWow. Loved that twist. It was totally unexpected. Great story there. Loved having you at Friday reflections.
ReplyDeleteThank you Shalini for visiting. Glad that you liked it.
DeleteOh my this is quite a creative and suspense filled tale Anagha; kudos for writing very hatke for the prompt!
ReplyDeleteOh Shalz! So good to have you here. Thanks dear for visiting and appreciating my story.
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